Tuesday, December 1, 2009

Two For Tuesday Review: Hunter Brown and Ryann Watters

(This review is cross-posted at Speculative Faith.)

I was supposed to have finished this review months ago, but a lot of things jumped in the way, namely school, work, other books, etc. Anyway, I’m back in the saddle, and ready to proceed with my special double review. I purchased two Christian fantasy books not too long ago at about the same time. Each of them has a similar premise, and I decided for fun to review them both at the same time. The two books are Ryann Watters and the King’s Sword by Eric Reinhold and Hunter Brown and the Secret of the Shadow by the Miller Brothers.

I’ll briefly recap what both stories are about. In Ryann Watters, the titular character is visited by an angel who gives him special items and a mission to find the King’s Sword. He eventually enters the land of Aeliana, a land inhabited by talking animals. In Hunter Brown, the titular character and a friend of his end up in the land of Solandria, where Hunter joins a force called the Codebearers, who fight for the Author against the evil Venator and the forces of Sceleris, a being who once was the Author’s scribe.

Given the growing number of Christian fantasy authors, we’ve got an opportunity to how they put spins on a familiar theme. In this case, we have two good stories that take the same idea: young person ends up in fantasy world to fight evil-and fashion different takes on it. I’ll first look at each book separately.

Hunter Brown reminded me a lot of Wayne Batson’s The Door Within. Both stories feature a villain that was once favored of the God-like character (The Author in Hunter Brown, King Eliam in The Door Within), but became greedy for more and instead is punished for his transgressions by being thrown into a lesser state-Paragor from TDW wanted to be king but can only be a prince, Sceleris wanted to be an author himself but is now a character in the Author’s book. Hunter and Aidan (the protagonist from TDW) both attend a dinner and are acclaimed as a special guest that is chosen for a special duty. Aidan and Hunter are surrounded by colorful warriors with boisterous personalities, and also are paired up with a strong warrior-gal. Both boys have a vision that the elder warriors take seriously, with one going to consult in private about the matter. Both books feature a battle against a city by the evil army (though in Hunter Brown it occurs off-page), and a subsequent journey into the dark forces’ lair. Hunter Brown even slips in at least two times the phrase “Never alone.” (I’m not saying Hunter Brown is a rip-off, I just found the similarities interesting. I have seen stories that seem like shameless rip-offs; this isn’t one of them)

Okay, some of the story elements weren’t all that new, but the execution was very good. But the last few chapters took the story from cool to awesome land. The revelation about Venator actually wasn’t that surprising considering Ventator’s age, but it was still great. But as it goes on, the story just gets plain…unpredictable. Things happen that you don’t expect, and Hunter doesn’t always make the best choices, or even choices you think he’s going to make. Even his allegiance-to the Shadow or the Codebearers, isn’t really settled until the final few pages, and for a moment, Hunter actually makes a choice that protagonists usually don’t make in these stories-(SPOILER)-he decides not to choose either side. Granted, his choice doesn’t work out like he wanted, natch, but I actually like that for a moment that he doesn’t know if he should trust anybody but himself. The last part of this story is a head-spinning, riveting conclusion, and it hands this story a big thumbs up.

Stylistically, I like the book cover and the illustrations that popped up at times. Also, the book is written from a first person perspective, which is not very common in these fantasy books, and the authors deserve kudos for making it work. It’s generally hard to write in this fashion because you can’t cut away from the main character, at least not very easily.

Now to Ryann Watters. This story focuses on three human characters and three talking animal characters, with the main hero being Ryann. While it is a fantasy story, it actually doesn’t focus a lot on the fantasy world of Aeliana. Ryann and his friends make brief stops there for about the first two thirds of the tale, while being pursued by their arch-nemesis Drake. The emphasis in this story is actually on Ryann’s spiritual education. To solve mysteries, he frequently consults the Bible, and many of the good guys quote Scripture extensively.

The story is pretty straight forward, and it won’t knock your socks off with a “wow, I wasn’t expecting that” moment. But it’s a pleasant read. One of things I liked is the dual storyline of hero and villain. In this case, the antagonist, Drake, is another teenager, matching Ryann with a peer opponent, a reverse of the “chosen one” trope. Here the bad guys also recruit a young person for adventure, albeit a bad one. And Drake isn’t entirely unsympathetic. He’s a villain, but one who’s had a hard life, and you wonder if Eric has redemption plans for him down the road.

On the downside, Aeliana is not described much in detail. There’s very little to distinguish this place from say, Narnia, and many of the visits don’t build the world up very much.

So, how do these two stories compare? Hunter Brown was more allegorical in its spiritual themes, while Ryann Watters is a lot more direct, with few or no stand-ins for God, Scripture, and angels. For example, Hunter consults the Author’s Writ for wisdom, while Ryann goes right to the Bible itself. The protagonists themselves are different. Hunter is an unbeliever who spends the whole story trying to pick his allegiance, while Ryann is already a good kid who’s trying to mature in his faith. They’re both good avenues to explore; I think you need stories about an unbelieving protagonist who finds the light, and about a believer who learns to persevere and mature.

Tone-wise, you could compare Hunter Brown to Nickelodeon, with gross-outs, rebellious kids, and lots of action. Ryann Watters on the other hand is more like Disney, with a lighter, more “magical” world with talking animals and plucky, good-natured protagonists. Actually, I was struck by how non-violent Ryann Watters was. It has some action, but it’s actually quite light for this genre. I could see this book as very accessible for the younger set, a stepping stone for other works in this genre.

I’d say pick up either one of these books. I think both of them are good, though I’d give Hunter Brown a higher grade. Both stories also have sequels out, which I hope to review again, perhaps in another double-review. And hopefully, I will have that review out in a timely fashion-before book number three in both series debuts on the bookshelves…

Saturday, November 28, 2009

New Review Coming Up

I'm hoping to post a long-delayed post of two books: Hunter Brown and the Secret of the Shadow, and Ryann Watters and the King's Sword. I was hoping to get this review out before the sequels were released, but, you know, life gets in the way...haha. So stick around!

Wednesday, November 18, 2009

Curse of the Spider King Blog Tour Day Three

Today I give my complete review of Wayne Batson and Christopher Hopper’s book Curse of the Spider King.

A little background before I start. I haven’t read any of Christopher Hopper’s books, so I don’t have an idea of what his “style” is like. (Sorry, Christopher, I just have a backlog of stuff, but I do want to get to them) I have read The Door Within and Rise of the Wyrm Lord, and a few chapters of The Final Storm. Still haven’t gotten to his two pirate stories yet. (Again, sorry)
The cover is great, with armored soldiers riding atop giant spiders amid a forest setting with a castle in the background. The idea of soldiers riding spiders is cool. We’ve seen horses a zillion times, but spiders? I hope readers don’t have arachnophobia!

However, you won’t see much of the fantasy world of Allyra. Almost all of the story actually takes place on Earth, as we met seven young protagonists who we come to see have some things in common. They begin to develop unusual gifts, and are given books by various adults that allow them to see into the history of Allyra, and this is where the style of the book changes in both font and appearance. The pages now look like an ancient tome, and the content is much more Lord of the Rings-like, with a race of elves fighting for survival against the evil Spider King. There aren’t many of these scenes in the story, but there are compelling when you do read them. But this is definitely an Earth-bound story.

With seven protagonists, it takes a while for the story to get moving. We spend a lot of time getting to know them and their families, and see how their gifts affect their day to day lives, sort of like a junior version of X-Men. It’s not until we get until the final third of the book that things really pick up, but boy does it. If this book ever gets made into a movie, the final battle scene would be worth the price of admission.

I have to say Wayne and Christopher do a good job at capturing the hopes and fears of adolescent youngsters. I thought Wayne pulled that off well in The Door Within, and this book feels like an older brother to that story, just more complex and introspective. I think there will be more than a few times when young readers will come across a scene and say, “I wish I could do that!” (Especially during the test-taking scene) Also, the kids are not just Americans or even British as they tend to be in these tales. We get Scottish and Russian teenagers as well, complete with some thick accents. Finally, there are scenes that are laugh out loud funny. I don’t know which of the writing duo is responsible for the “what are the boys/girls thinking” scene, but kudos to whoever thought it up!

Also, while the elves are unquestionably the good guys in the story, Wayne and Christopher don’t put them off the hook in incurring the Spider King’s wrath. Some time in the past, the elves apparently did something to the Gwar, but it’s not spelled out in this book (at least not that I can remember). An interesting angle that should be explored in the second book.

So did Wayne deliver on his spin on “the chosen one” trope? I think this might be the story, because as it turns out, these seven kids aren’t from Earth at all, but are actually Allyra elves who escaped the Spider King’s massacre. Yeah, I have to say there are very few times when it’s been done the other way around! (Maybe Superman qualifies?)

But these kids actually aren’t sent to Earth for their safety…but for the bad guys’! As it turns out, killing the children of the Elf Lords invokes a curse, so the Spider King doesn’t want to do the deed, and the unfortunate flunkies who captured the newborn Elf Lord children don’t want to either, but they’ll get on the Spider King’s bad side if they don’t, so they treat the babies like a hot potato and push them off on us humans, thinking it’ll be our problem now. Now that’s a cool (and funny) twist!

The book had its surprises. It’s not a big adventure story, though the few Allyra scenes are pretty exciting. I suspect the next book, Venom and Song, will be like that. It’s not an obvious journey to Narnia-like story. In a way, it’s more like a journey to Earth-then journey to Allyra story. Also, there isn’t a clear protagonist or pair of protagonists. With seven of them, the story jumps from one to the other, though I was beginning to think Tommy Bowman was emerging as the “hero,” by the last third. Some reviewers have complained that there are too many protagonists in the story, and if you add in their adult “helpers,” that adds to the page count. Now, I actually don’t mind a lot of characters as long as they’re interesting. I think this bunch is, but they need to get involved in a story that allows them to interact together more. You had to wait until the last third for that to happen. Personally, if I have a big cast, I try to link them together as early as possible, depending on how long the story is. Sometimes you do need to separate out characters for long periods of time.

I’ve read a few reviews that wonder if this book is “Christian” enough. I did detect a general respect for Christianity in the book, a Bible verse or two is quoted, and the elves have their own name for God. It maybe not be overtly Christian, but I did think that there’s a subtle theme in this story about receiving and using one’s gifts for the glory of the King, as Christians are gifted in real life, as having different positions in the body of Christ (being the ear, the eyes, the hand, etc) and using them to advance the kingdom. Actually, the fact that the themes are more subtle here can be a good thing, as this book could possibly find its way into public schools.
In sum, I liked this book. It’s fun, very realistic with the young characters, and even creepy at times (as in cue the Psycho theme creepy). I’m sure Venom and Song will knock our socks off!


And next time we deal with spiders, perhaps we should call John Goodman.















"Rock and Roll."

Tuesday, November 17, 2009

Curse of the Spider King Blog Tour, Day Two

While I was reading this book, it occurred to me that Wayne may have given me a clue as to what the story would be like. Two years ago, Wayne posted this on his writer’s forum:

I've heard it said that there are a finite number of basic plots for a novel. Things like "the quest," "the coming of age," "the discovery," etc. ...that all stories at the simplest level fall into one of the set number of plot structures.

I've also seen books panned because "the plot is derivative." Eragon, which I happen to like btw, has dozens of one and two-star reviews on Amazon, the majority of which decry the story for being a rip off of LotR and Star Wars.

Thing is, Lucas "borrowed" much of his plot from Arthurian legend, and Tolkien, all-time-master-story-teller that he is, borrowed heavily from Norse traditions.

So my question is twofold:

1. Are there plotlines out there that have just been "done to death?"

2. What can an author do to revive or renew familiar plots so that they will feel original to the reader?


Personally, I thought the Eragon movie was very derivative of the first Star Wars movie, though I can't speak for the book.
I answered question one this way.

…there's the "YOU ARE THE CHOSEN ONE!" story, which we've seen a lot from Star Wars, The Matrix, Dune, the Terminator movies, and Lord of the Rings. Here, basically an unwitting chap is yanked from his regular, hum-drum life and is told he has a special destiny, in many ways it's a variant on Christ's story. This plot, to be honest, is one I think needs to be retired or at least semi-retired, because the moment the bearded (or in Morpheus' case, the shaded) one reveals the chosen one's destiny, the suspense is pretty much gone. You know he's going to receive his special powers or whatever and defeat the evil forces, because "he's the chosen one." (I know Lucas made Anakin the chosen one, but he turned out to be a bad guy, and I still don't understand what Lucas was trying to tell us with that) I just think things like that, and old prophesies fortelling the hero's fate, really sucks a lot of anticipation out of the story, unless it's done really really well.


You know, if you think about it, it really is a done-to-death cliche. How many movies and books have this plot device? (Though quite a few still do it well)
Anyway, the Waynester replied:

Awww, mannnn, Jason, just wait for my next fantasy series. I am SO going to turn this cliche on its head.


Hmmm….well that piqued my curiosity. Is Curse of the Spider King said turning said cliché on said head? Read tomorrow's post to find out!

So how did Wayne and Christopher collaborate on this book, given they live in two different states? How do you bring two creative minds together on a single work of fiction? In two really neat posts, Wayne addresses that. The images on the blogs are especially cool. Check them out: here and here .

James Somers also asked Wayne about the creative process today, so check that out, too.

Finally, these video links have Wayne and Christoper discussing COTSK.

Author Talk: The Art of Layering
Author Talk: Batson & Hopper Lackawana Interview
Author Talk: More Than Words

Next time, my personal review of Curse of the Spider King!

P.S. Um, I wonder if anyone’s told Christopher that his ceek@mac.com address can be pronounced as “C-Eek!”

*Featured book:
Curse of the Spider King - Order From Amazon.

Author and series links:
Wayne Thomas Batson’s blog - http://enterthedoorwithin.blogspot.com/
Christopher Hopper’s Web site - http://www.christopherhopper.com/
The Berinfell Prophecies Web site - http://www.heedtheprophcies.com


*Participants’ Links:
Brandon Barr
Justin Boyer
Amy Browning
Valerie Comer
Amy Cruson
CSFF Blog Tour
Stacey Dale
D. G. D. Davidson
Shane Deal
Jeff Draper
Emmalyn Edwards
April Erwin
Karina Fabian
Todd Michael Greene
Ryan Heart
Timothy Hicks
Becky Jesse
Cris Jesse
Jason Joyner
Julie
Carol Keen
Krystine Kercher
Tina Kulesa
Melissa Lockcuff
Rebecca LuElla Miller
Mirtika
Nissa
John W. Otte
Cara Powers
Chawna Schroeder
James Somers
Speculative Faith
Robert Treskillard
Fred Warren
Jason Waguespack
Phyllis Wheeler
Jill Williamson
KM Wilsher

Monday, November 16, 2009

Curse of the Spider King Blog Tour Day 1

Today I’m posting the first of three posts on a new novel by Wayne Thomas Batson and Christopher Hopper. The duo has been known for their previous forays into fantasy, with Wayne having written The Door Within trilogy, and Christopher publishing The White Lion Chronicles. But this time they’ve teamed up on their first co-authored effort, Curse of the Spider King. It’s a fantasy story about seven Earth teenagers who aren’t as they appear to be…and rival forces from the world of Allyra arrive on Earth to battle for their future.

Here’s what Wayne had to say about the book on Amazon.com:

Curse of the Spider King is my sixth novel, but it is the first that I've cowritten. I met coAuthor Christopher Hopper at a publisher's convention in Denver about four years ago. We were, at that time, writing for different publishers, but we just happened to book the same hotel (I think because it was inexpensive. lol) Through a number of goofy circumstances, I ended up meeting Christopher Hopper at one of his events, and it was the strangest thing. I felt like I'd somehow known Christopher for 20 years. We had so much in common, being fantasy writers, but also in terms of faith, music, hobbies, way of thinking...right down to a whacked-Monty Python-meets-John Hughes sense of humor.

Christopher lives in Upstate NY, and I live in Maryland, so we looked for a middle ground where we could get together for "Writers Bootcamp" weekends. Together we worked on our different novels and found it to be extremely rewarding. I still remember walking down the snowy streets of Scranton, puffing out wisps of breath, saying, "Wouldn't it be cool if we could write a novel together some day?" Well, fast forward, and God opened up that door for us.

Readers you should know that this project does not represent two authors writing in two voices. Nor is it more Wayne's style or more Christopher's style. This is "OUR" voice together, and I think it's an improvement over anything we've done alone.

Readers, you should also be warned: we had a hysterically good time writing Curse of the Spider King (and now its sequels). We write using iChat, Messenger, Cell Phone). If you could listen in to our writing conversations, you would hear two fantasy-loving maniacs, cackling away like mad scientists as we create. The result, we think, is a massively entertaining adventure that turns the fantasy "portal story" on its head and asks, "What if a fantasy realm invaded our world?"

Get ready for mysterious events, relentless action, middle-of-the-night chills, and a wriggling, snarling, scratching collection of creatures that is sure to please imaginative readers of all ages.

Please let us know what you think of Spider King. And get ready for the sequel: Venom and Song, due out May 2010.


If you want to learn more about Wayne and Christopher and their work, here are some links you can explore:

Wayne Thomas Batson

Interview: Wayne Thomas Batson
Ten Tough Questions (and 1 easy one) for...Wayne Thomas Batson!
L.B. Graham - Wayne Thomas Batson
Interview with Wayne Thomas Batson
The Fantasy 4 Fiction Tour #6a- Wayne Thomas Batson
The Fantasy 4 Fiction Tour #6b- Wayne Thomas Batson
Curse of the Spider King Author Interview Part 1
Curse of the Spider King Author Interview Part 2
Interview with Wayne Batson
Interview with Wayne Batson
Interview with Wayne Batson
Interview with Wayne Batson
Interview with Wayne Batson
Q & A with Wayne Batson
Where the Map Ends - Wayne Thomas Batson
7 minute trailer for The Door Within Trilogy

Christopher Hopper

Interview: Christopher Hopper
Enter the Door Within - Motiv8 Blog Tour - Christopher Hopper
Eric Reinhold's Blog - Christopher Hopper
L.B. Graham - Christopher Hopper
Interview with Christopher Hopper
The Fantasy 4 Fiction Tour #4a- Christopher Hopper
The Fantasy 4 Fiction Tour #4b- Christopher Hopper's Book Trailers
News Article on Curse of the Spider King
Interview with Christopher Hopper
The Power of Stories
Local Author Takes Readers to Another World
Touring for the Tour, Day 3
Where the Map Ends - Christopher Hopper
Rise of the Dibor Trailer
The Lion Vrie Book Trailer Episode 1
The Lion Vrie Book Trailer
Author Talk: Wayne Thomas Batson and Christopher Hopper
Author Talk: The Art of Layering
Author Talk: Batson & Hopper Lackawana Interview
Author Talk: More Than Words


Feel free to head on over to Amazon.com if you're interested in a copy:

Author and series links:
Wayne Thomas Batson’s blog - http://enterthedoorwithin.blogspot.com/
Christopher Hopper’s Web site - http://www.christopherhopper.com/
The Berinfell Prophecies Web site - http://www.heedtheprophcies.com


*Participants’ Links:
Brandon Barr
Justin Boyer
Amy Browning
Valerie Comer
Amy Cruson
CSFF Blog Tour
Stacey Dale
D. G. D. Davidson
Shane Deal
Jeff Draper
Emmalyn Edwards
April Erwin
Karina Fabian
Todd Michael Greene
Ryan Heart
Timothy Hicks
Becky Jesse
Cris Jesse
Jason Joyner
Julie
Carol Keen
Krystine Kercher
Tina Kulesa
Melissa Lockcuff
Rebecca LuElla Miller
Mirtika
Nissa
John W. Otte
Cara Powers
Chawna Schroeder
James Somers
Speculative Faith
Robert Treskillard
Fred Warren
Jason Waguespac
Phyllis Wheeler
Jill Williamson
KM Wilsher


Next time: The Making of Curse of the Spider King!

Tuesday, October 13, 2009

Hi Everybody...

Wow, do your eyes deceive you? Is this actually a new post?

Yep, it is.

Yours truly has been very busy lately, and fell out of certain habits like hanging around this blog. However, you may have noticed that the links on the MOTIV8 Tour post below have been increasing of late. I've added some new links over the past few weeks, so you may wish to give the post another look.

I should also add a congratulation to Wayne Baton and Christopher Hopper on seeing their new book Curse of the Spider King jump up several thousand places on Amazon.com. I preordered a copy myself. :)

I'm hoping to get back into the swing of things, so stick around for some fun stuff!

Monday, March 16, 2009

Hunter Brown And The Secret Of The Shadow - Blog Tour


The one thing young readers like is a good book cover. And Hunter Brown and the Secret of the Shadow has a smashing cover. With so many choices on the bookshelf, you want to find something that'll just grab you. A good book title will do it, but I don't think anything beats a cover.

What grabbed me was the artwork. It has a nice, animated look to it, not cartoony in a young, kiddish way, but it does look neat. The authors clearly get their audience. Granted, I'm closer to 30 than 15, but hey, I haven't lost my love for the fantastic, for animated shows, and of course, for kids wielding swords or other medieval weaponry.

So what is Hunter Brown about? Well, let's read the Amazon.com synposis:

Strange visions...hideous monsters...startling revelations... Hunter Brown never expected a summer like this, and it’s only getting started! After one of his infamous pranks backfires, Hunter unexpectedly finds himself in possession of an ancient book and key. Little does he know the mysterious book is a gateway to Solandria, a supernatural realm held captive by the Shadow. In Solandria, Hunter joins forces with the Codebearers, a band of highly trained warriors who form the Resistance to the Shadow. But before he can complete his training in the ways of the Code of Life, Hunter is sent on a mission far more dangerous than he ever bargained for. Now with his life in peril and the future of Solandria hanging in the balance, Hunter is headed for a showdown with the Shadow and a battle to save his soul from a fate worse than death! Is Hunter’s knowledge of the Code deep enough to uncover the secret of the Shadow, or will the truth be more than he can bear?
Hmmm...mysterious book, mysterious artifact, alternate dimension...all defintely things we've seen before. But that's what makes it fun! We like that stuff. The key word here is execution. How is it executed?

Well, I bought a copy of this book a few months ago and started to read it, but other obligations kept me from completing it. Unfortunately, my memory fails me on details, but I did like what I read.

I know...that doesn't say a lot, huh? Sorry guys. But while I can't speak from first-hand experience on how the book is overall, I do think the storyline sounds exciting, the cover art is neat, and the authors' enthusiasm for their work, as I've read on their blog, is catching. And judging from the responses on other blogs, the book comes highly recommended.

So on that basis alone, check it out!

By it on Amazon: Hunter Brown and the Secret of the Shadow
The Miller Brothers’ Web site - http://www.codebearers.com/
The Miller Brothers’ blog - http://themillerbrothers.blogspot.com/

Brandon Barr
Keanan Brand
Melissa Carswell
Valerie Comer
Amy Cruson
CSFF Blog Tour
Stacey Dale
D. G. D. Davidson
Shane Deal
Jeff Draper
April Erwin
Karina Fabian
Marcus Goodyear
Todd Michael Greene
Katie Hart
Ryan Heart
Timothy Hicks
Jason Isbell
Cris Jesse
Jason Joyner
Carol Keen
Mike Lynch
Magma
Rebecca LuElla Miller
Nissa
Wade Ogletree
John W. Otte
Steve Rice
Crista Richey
Chawna Schroeder
James Somers
Rachel Starr Thomson
Steve Trower
Speculative Faith
Fred Warren
Phyllis Wheeler
Jill Williamson